Tuesday, May 13, 2025

Letter to a member of the House of Representatives urging support for abortion rights

 Dear Congresswoman Veronica Escobar,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you today to advocate for the preservation and expansion of abortion rights in our country. As a representative who has shown commitment to women's health and rights, your leadership is crucial in ensuring that all individuals have the autonomy to make informed choices about their own bodies.

To illustrate the significance of this issue, I want to share a hypothetical case that reflects the reality many women face. Imagine a young woman named Sarah, who is in her early twenties and has dreams of pursuing a career in medicine. She is a dedicated student, working part-time to support herself while attending college. One day, Sarah discovers she is pregnant. This news comes as a shock, as she had plans to finish her education and establish a stable career before starting a family.

Sarah is faced with a difficult decision. She knows that bringing a child into her current circumstances would not only derail her educational aspirations, but also place an immense financial burden on her and her family. After careful consideration, she decides that terminating the pregnancy is the best choice for her future and the future she hopes to provide for any potential children. However, Sarah lives in a state where access to safe and legal abortion services is severely restricted. She encounters numerous obstacles, including long wait times, financial barriers, and the stigma surrounding her decision.

This scenario highlights the importance of preserving abortion rights. Women like Sarah should have the agency to make decisions that align with their life goals, health, and circumstances. Access to safe and legal abortion is not just a matter of personal choice; it is a fundamental aspect of women's health care that impacts their ability to participate fully in society. When we restrict access to abortion, we disproportionately affect marginalized communities, leading to greater inequality and hardship.

Furthermore, I urge you to consider the values that underpin our society—values of compassion, empathy, and respect for individual autonomy. The ability to make choices about one's body is a cornerstone of personal freedom. By supporting abortion rights, you are affirming the belief that women deserve to have control over their reproductive health and the right to make decisions that are best for them and their families. It is essential to recognize that these choices are deeply personal and often made in the context of complex and challenging circumstances.

As you continue your vital work in Congress, I hope you will advocate for policies that protect and expand access to abortion services. Together, we can ensure that all individuals, regardless of their circumstances, have the right to make informed choices about their reproductive health. Thank you for your attention to this important issue, and for your ongoing commitment to the rights and well-being of women across our nation.


Sincerely, [Student]


I didn't realize that you had a connection to west Texas or El Paso, but Congresswoman Escobar is a progressive member of the House of Representatives who would be likely to sympathize with your request.


This is an example of an issue advocacy letter, rather than advocacy for a specific bill or policy, which is fine. In this case, you are urging a progressive Democrat to advocate for women having the right to choose abortion as a form of care in reproductive health. You specifically use an example of someone who would choose abortion because a child would interfere with life plans, and not out of some need to protect her health.  This is a good example to emphasize the importance of giving women autonomy and choice over their reproductive processes. 


You use three paragraphs to set up the moral narrative of a woman whose career ambitions would be blocked if she brought a pregnancy to term, and you emphasize how restrictions on abortion would delay Sarah's ability to receive care (in Texas, where Representative Escobar lives, the abortion would be entirely illegal, and a doctor performing the abortion could be charged with a first or second degree felony and fined $100,000 as a civil penalty). 


Your appeal is mainly centered around the argument that women have rights, autonomy, and the ability to make informed moral decisions about their own pregnancies. This is likely to be well-received by a liberal or progressive Democrat, such as Representative Escobar.


You do not thank Representative Escobar for her vote in favor of House Resolution 3755, the Women's Health Protection Act of 2021. I think that recognition of what she has done already would make the letter stronger.  It would be a good idea to ask Representative Escobar to support the introduction of a similar House resolution as soon as Democrats retake the House (presumably, in January of 2027), and also urge her to support Senate candidates who would vote for such a resolution in the 2026 Senate elections held in Texas, Ohio, North Carolina, Michigan, Maine, Georgia, Iowa, Nebraska, Kanas, Kentucky, and Alaska.  I think in an issue advocacy letter, you might say something about how this particular Representative could help sway voters in some of these states, and you might ask her to become active in campaigning in Latina communities in these states. 


The way the letter is constructed, and the fact that you have chosen to write to an Representative in Texas (El Paso), and the odd fact that the paper suggests there would be difficulties in getting an abortion, when in fact in Texas the abortion would be completely illegal, and the fact that the letter has no personal information that would be highly relevant to this specific Representative, and the fact that the letter is soulless and vapid and lacks human voice or any personality, all convince me that the letter was generated mostly or entirely by artificial intelligence.  In fact, I submitted the letter to three different applications for detecting writing done by artificial intelligence, and all three algorithms confirmed my suspicions. The letter was written by an artificial intelligence, and not written by the student who submitted it. 

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